Friday, June 7, 2019
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Hi my name is Eman, I am a year 6 at Papakura central school.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story because it gets you hoked on from the first sentence and is cool how you made it like a small chapter book. Next time I think you should change the font because it's a bit hard to read but other than that its really good.
thanks i will do that
ReplyDeleteThis is so good.
ReplyDeleteHi,Angus your blog is good
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